Sorry that I haven't posted one of these in awhile, especially since I couldn't with working on Walking a Thin Line, since it is a second book I feel like posting a sample would be a major spoiler for the first book. So today I'm going to post a sample from The Four Purposes of Oil! I'm getting attached to the characters already so I hope you enjoy this Romantic Fiction ~ New Adult book. Heads up though, I will be changing this book to 3rd person instead of first. I will tell you though I will be learning more about cars so it will get a little fuller with details. Again this is just eh skeleton of the first chapter and I hope you enjoy :)
**I'm tossing and turning over if it should be in 3rd or 1st person that's why it changes sorry!!**
Chapter one
Noah
The speakers were shot, more static
then music was really blaring out, but with the constant sounds of the machines
it was hard to hear the music anyway. The sounds of the engines and tools roar
as they fixed the inner workings of a car all were tranquil peace. There was
nothing greater then working on a car. The warm air drifting into the garage
and as a young man wiped his forehead with his forearm not caring that there
was probably new smudge of grease on his face.
“Noah, did you figure out what’s
wrong with the Wyant’s car?” a voice called out from the office, the door was
open with a small fan blowing.
Glancing up the young man, Noah saw
his boss Stan holding a box with the lo mein hanging over parts of the box. His
t-shirt was half tucked into his jeans and baseball cap on his head; he was in
his early thirties.
“Yeah I got it, it’ll take another
couple of minutes if we’ve a piece that needs to be replaced,” Noah responded
wiping his hands on his own t-shirt.
Stan’s face stretch into a half
smile, “That’s my guy, I knew I kept you around for a reason.”
Noah raised an eyebrow and smirked,
“Yeah so you don’t have to do the work.”
“I thought it was so he could look
at our fine asses,” another voice shouted across the garage, Justin.
“I swear if your head inflates
anymore Justin you won’t be able to fit through those doors,” Stan shot back
pointing over to the garage door with his fork.
Justin grinned, his blond hair was
held back by a bandana. He twirled a wrenched in his hand.
“Stop thinking you’re a pretty boy
and finish that carbonator,” Stan rolled his eyes before going into the office.
“I swear it’s on a daily bases I
feel bad for your poor mother,” Noah muttered heading out back with the
supplies.
“My mom or my girl?” Justin asked
for clarification.
Noah grabbed the part that he
needed and headed back to the car he was working on.
“Both I guess, possibly more for
your mom because your girl could leave if she wanted to.”
“Hey she got a taste of Justin, and
now she doesn’t want to leave,” Justin chuckled, but he was peering into the
hood of the car he was working on to see what Justin was doing.
“Oh so you’re drugging the poor
girl,” I responded back moving parts around.
“Ha! Nothing, but with my charm.”
I shook my head. I had met Karen
and he was a lucky guy.
“My butt you have charm.”
“Will you two Chatty Cathy’s put a
sock in it or do I have to bring out the tea set for this ordeal?” Stan yelled
out.
My body ached as I got home late
that night, I always worked longer then what the hours said at GARAGE NAME.
Trudging my feet across the tile floor of my apartment I opened the fridge to
find something to eat. The light from the fridge lit up the small apartment,
and it was pretty close to empty. There was a carton of orange juice, a box of
baking soda, and something in a Styrofoam box. Narrowing my eyes I picked it up
not remembering when the last time I brought something home was. There was a
buffalo chicken wrap with some curly fries. How was it possible I brought home
food from Angelia’s Diner? I usually ate the entire thing when I was there.
Looking at the top of the box I smiled at the sticky note on there.
Miss
you Idiot!
Remember
to eat, noticed no food!
What’s
wrong with you?
Remy
The best friend a guy could have.
She must have dropped it off today since she was using my laundry room.
Glancing over at the top of oven to see what time it was, a little after
eleven. She probably would still be awake. Putting the food onto the small tray
then into the toast my stomach growled as if it finally realized it was hungry.
Pulling my cell phone out of my pocket using my short nails that were still
dark from the grease from work I searched for her name. Pushing her Remy on the
contact list I heard it ringing.
“Hey you’re alive! Or are you still
in the garage?” Remy responded.
I chuckled, “Nah I’m home sorry for
being a little MIA lately. Thanks for the food by the way.”
Remy laughed a little, “It’s the
least I could do is give you food, I mean you work so much you need food. You
use to be organized and on top of things.”
Glancing around my place that was
just the opposite of what Remy just described.
“I’m never home, I pretty much live
at the garage.”
“Yeah I noticed I went to your
place and a couple of your neighbors asked if I was a new tenet.”
Turning the lights on in the place
I peeked into the toaster and took out my food.
“I think I’m at your place more
then you are,” Remy continued as I took a bite out of the food, best thing
ever.
“Oh my God I think I love you,” I
mumbled with food still in my mouth.
Remy broke out fully laughing.
“Well I know how you love their
buffalo chicken wrap.”
“It’s food for the Gods,” I spoke
with food still my mouth and I leaned back against my counter tops.
“So I’ve decided you and I need to
go out,” Remy randomly blurted out.
I raised an eyebrow and stopped
chewing.
“What are you talking about?”
“God way to make hanging out with
your friend sound like a chore.”
I sighed rolling my eyes now
waiting for the punch line.
“Sorry.”
“I haven’t seen you in what weeks?”
I narrowed my eyes trying to back
track in time in an attempt to remember the last time I had seen my friend, or
anyone who I didn’t work with.
“I’ll take your pause as a sign
that I’m correct if not longer. So I know for a fact that the garage closes at
eight so on Friday I will be kidnapping you at nine and we’re going out. You’ll
be showered, shaven, and wearing something that does not have grease on it before
we go to Murphy’s.”
“Why do I have to get so dolled
up?”
“Showering is getting dolled up? If
that’s a case you and I need to have a discussion about hygiene.”
“I’ll be clean, don’t get your
panties all in a twist.”
I grabbed a couple fries and shoved
them into my mouth.
“Sorry for wanting to hang out with
my friend?”
“You should be, how dare you,” my
voice was even before eating a couple more fries.
Crunchy fries were the best.
“So you want to meet there or do
you want to car pool?”
“I’ll drive it sounds like you need
a drink,” I offered.
“I work with kindergarteners all
day, you do that and see if you need a drink.”
I chuckled.
“What happened to, ‘I want to have
eight kids’?”
“Hey when they are my own kids I
can do what I want!” Remy’s voice was borderline shriek.
“That’s a comfort.”
“Oh shove off.”
“What a friend, no wonder we
haven’t hung out in awhile,” I joked with her.
“You’re a pain.”
“Woah, wait a minute,” Justin’s
voice came from behind me in as I was inside the office. “You know it’s time to
check out right at a normal rate?”
“No I didn’t notice that, I thought
the moon and sun switched roles,” I muttered standing back up and took my car
keys off of the hanger on the wall.
“Justin leave him alone this means
I can actually close at the right time,” Stan responded locking the door behind
us.
“So what’s up?” Justin asked as we
headed to our cars.
His car was next to my baby.
“Remy said we needed to hang out so
she is kidnapping me,” I replied opening my car door and standing out still
looking over at him as he fiddled with his car.
“She’s still working on you isn’t
she?” Justin glanced over me with serious eyes.
“I’m kind of hoping if I keep
playing obvious the girl will give up,” I groaned running my fingers through my
short hair.
Justin chuckled, “Yeah? How’s that
working for you?”
I rolled my eyes and paused.
“That good huh?”
“Life isn’t a romantic comedy, you
don’t always end up with your friend that you’ve known for years.”
“I know those damn movies are
making our lives hard.”
“Just treat your girl for a night
out every once in awhile and she’ll stop throwing these movies in your face.”
Justin raised an eyebrow at me,
“Whose side you on?”
Laughing I replied, “Didn’t know I
had to pick sides, but her cooking is better then yours.”
Justin smiled, “It is she’s cooking
dinner tonight.”
“Pick up flowers for her or
something maybe she’ll go easy on you tonight,” I suggested inching a little
into my car so I wouldn’t have to face the wrath of Remy tonight myself.
Justin shrugged, “I should, so see
you tomorrow.”
“See you tomorrow.”
Sitting in I slammed my door and
headed home. Once I parked in the lot behind the apartments I waved to one of
my neighbors while grabbing the mail. The neighbor squinted and awkwardly waved
back. I guess Remy wasn’t joking about my neighbors not knowing who I was. I
jumped the stairs taking a couple at a time and unlocked my door. Dropping the
junk mail onto my counter with my keys top since I didn’t have a table I
started to yank my shirt over my head as I walked to the bathroom. Turning the
shower on and waited for the water to heat up. While waiting I decided to brush
my teeth and check the facial hair situation, got to love the few moments of
being able to multitask.
Once I was showered and dressed for
the evening I grabbed my keys once again and headed towards Remy’s place. She
was renting a place till the condo she was buying was done being built. Texting
her to let her know that I was there I bopped my head around a little to the
music. Finally she came strolling out of her place. I had to give it to her,
she walked in heels like a well trained model. Remy tossed her hair over her
shoulders as she made her way over, in jeans and a off the shoulder shirt. She
got into the car and turned to look at me grinning.
“See you clean up well when you
actually leave the garage!”
I rolled my eyes.
“Yeah, yeah whatever,” I muttered
pulling out of her complex.
“Oh don’t be such a sour puss or
this night is going to suck,” Remy responded as she fiddled with my radio
stations.
Shaking my head I finally pulled
into Murphy’s place where most of the spots were taken and people were crossing
the parking lot laughing. When we got out of the car the live country music
roared causing the two of us to smile. Remy grabbed my hand and pulled me
across the parking lot and into the restaurant. The whole middle was wooden
floors in front of the stage where the live music was held so that people could
dance. Off to the side was the bar and around the perimeter were tables for
everyone to sit at. I prefer the seats near the bar so I had a nice view of the
poor guys who got dragged across the floor.
“I can’t wait to get a drink,” Remy
was bouncing in her seat as she grabbed the menu even though I knew she that
whole menu by heart.
“Good to know that you need to
drink to be out with me,” I spoke dryly smirking at her.
“I didn’t know I had to threaten my
friend to hang out with me,” She responded not taking her eyes off of the menu.
I rolled my eyes as one of the
waitresses came by, she was friendly with Remy as she took out drink orders
then left.
“See so far, all is good right?”
Remy asked smiling at me as she leaned on her elbows on the table.
“Yeah, yeah, I never had any doubt about
that, I’m just busy,” I replied with a shrug.
“And I sit around eating Oreos all
day?”
“Well you deal with five year
olds,” I smirked.
Remy slapped my arm from across the
table as I laughed.
“You’re rotten! I know your daddy
raised you with more manners!”
Chuckling, “Yeah he did, but you
know I got his humor.”
Remy rolled her eyes down to her
drink stirring it a little, “What are the odds of me getting you on the dance
floor?”
I snorted, “Not on your life is
that happening.”
I started to pat around my pockets
for not only my release, but also my escape. Finally I pulled out my box of
cigarettes and Zippo lighter. Remy’s face scrunched.
“Ugh, I don’t get you and that
nasty habit,” Remy spat.
I shrugged, “I don’t smoke near you
and never have so chillax. I’ll be right back.”
Once I was outside I opened the
cartage and cursed under my breath. There was an IOU from Justin. What kind of
guy takes a man’s last cigarette?
I made my way to the side of the
road and waited till there was slow enough traffic for me to cross the
pharmacy. The beep greeted me and I made my way over to the only cashier on duty.
This woman with short black hair carrying a small bag up as well. I waved her
to go in front of me.
“They couldn’t take this back
there?” The cashier questioned with a raised brow and mid chew of the gum.
She shook her head, “He said they
were closing and to go here.”
The cashier popped her gum then
finished the young woman’s transaction. She bent her head over her small
plastic bag as she fished for her wallet once again to put her money away, but
she stepped aside so that I could pay.
“Hey Dawn, the usual,” I spoke
taking out my own wallet as the cashier took out a pack of cigarettes for me.
The young woman walked out of the
store. I paid for my pack and walked outside breaking the seal. Once outside
the girl was still there searching through her bag frantically. A curse was
uttered under her breath before she started to glance around on the ground.
“Do you need help?”
She glimpsed up before biting her
bottom lip, “I think I dropped my keys somewhere I can’t find them in my
purse.”
“Is there anything on the
keychain?”
She raised an eyebrow at me.
“I want to know what I’m looking
for.”
She nodded, “There’s a flat monkey
on it, and they are to my Nissan.”
Nodding my head I helped her search
the ground for something shiny. Pacing the sidewalk to two of us searched in
the dim parking lot lights. Finally something twinkled near the bushes
alongside of the pavement. Bending over my hand grazed the woman’s, she
retreated her hand. Picking up the pieces of metal I straightened back up to
look at her. Handing over her keys once again her eyes did not meet up with
mine.
“Here you go.”
“Thanks,” she brushed some of her
short hair behind her ear after she took the keys from me. “Well thank you
again I’m going to go now.”
“Okay, by the way-” before I could
introduce myself the woman hopped off towards her car leaving me behind not
sure what really happened. She was really in a rush.
“I swear you make us all look bad,”
Justin called from behind my back as I was hunched over a hood.
“Morning to you too,” I replied
straightening up and cracking my neck.
“Do you live here? I swear I saw
you leave yesterday,” Justin continued before taking a big gulp of his coffee.
“I left, hung out with Remy, came
home slept, then came here. You can call Remy if you don’t believe me, but if
you wake her up I’m not taking responsibility for your death,” I replied
hunching over once again working on a couple of things so my voice came out
short.
“Fair enough, so I took your advice
and brought home something for Karen. She’s been wanting a puppy-“
“Woah,” I backed away from the car
I was working on. “I said flowers not a living creature.”
“I didn’t get her a real puppy, I’m
not ready for that commitment, sharing an animal together. No I got her a stuff
animal dog of the one she mentioned she wanted once. This way it shows I’m
listening to her, but that we’re not ready to have a dog yet, especially since
her place doesn’t allow dogs.”
Nodding my head I pointed the
wrench at him, “I change my mind, that’s a nice touch.”
Justin with a wave of his hand
bowed.
“So how was getting out last
night,” Justin questioned again walking over to the wall of tools.
“Good, but that reminds me,” I
chucked a hand rag at him. “When were you planning on telling me that you took
my last cigarette?”
“Sorry Karen has been trying to get
me to quit so I haven’t bought any and I really needed one.”
“Wow really,” I spoke quietly.
“Good for you though, guess I should go hide the pack I got last night then.”
Justin just nodded his head as his
hands jittered about.
“When I was getting a pack last
night I met this strange woman. She was in such a rush to get out and lost her
keys. I had to help her find them then once I did she like disappeared into the
night.”
“What’s weird about that?” Justin
called out as he wheeled himself under a car that was left before he showed up.
“What thought she was good looking and didn’t get her name?”
“She didn’t have bad legs, but just
a gut feeling.”
“You’re over thinking things.”
Good dialog! Enjoyed reading it.
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